My Angel's Suicide [PG]

Subject: My Angel's Suicide [PG] Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:44 am

Yeah i know its sad, but its part of being emo (not that anymore) this is really old, and i want to share it wil people. If you don't like it, sorry.

My Angel's Suicide
The light was to bright
So he hid from the sun
In hi sdark palace
He held the gun
Closed eyes
Gripping the gun
Waiting for death
Placed his fingers
In perfect position
The gun; well loaded
Full of ammunition
Raising the fun to his head
He ran away from life
Chossing death instead
Pulled the trigger
And fired the shot
Dropping the gun
The barrel still hot
And in that split second
Before he died
I swear; I saw
MY ANGEL CRY....

yeah its sad, i cry every time i read it.

Subject: Re: My Angel's Suicide [PG] Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:47 am

I don't know if this is really considered mature though... it's just like... he killed himself... but it is quite a sad poem, when did you write this?

Subject: Re: My Angel's Suicide [PG] Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:49 am

you dont post your comments here xD

Subject: Re: My Angel's Suicide [PG] Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:50 am

WELL I DID! lol my bad.......

Subject: Re: My Angel's Suicide [PG] Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:51 am

*face palms* like 2 years ago