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Chihara Okazaki
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Chihara Okazaki


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PostSubject: Comments Section   Comments Section I_icon_minitimeSun Jun 27, 2010 1:42 pm
Comments?

As you read in the "How to Post a Story" section, you can't spam a person's work. If you have a comment or like to discuss a story, please post it here!
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PostSubject: Re: Comments Section   Comments Section I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 28, 2010 12:41 am
@ A Rose Hidden by Shadows (PG-13)

Imma be the first commenter on the first story and I call first because I'm sucha dork! 8D And you guys secretly love it - ahem *clears throat*
I think it was an interesting start and the fact you combined Furuba w/ OHSHC makes it an interesting cross-over I am dying to continue reading. Why is she bullied? I''m interested to find out. Oooh...is she "different"? Continue and you did an awesome revision. I think I spotted a small grammar problem (tenses), but I'm sure it could work either way so ignore it. :D
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Chouko Makoto
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PostSubject: Re: Comments Section   Comments Section I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 28, 2010 2:01 am
Wait, um it wasn't supposed to be a cross-over. Hmm, I guess since I never saw Fruits Basket I never would've picked up on that. Thank you for giving thoughts on it though, people rarely do that with any of my stories. ^_^
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PostSubject: Re: Comments Section   Comments Section I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 28, 2010 2:08 am
Never mind what I said, I was thinking something different and I must be out of it...I think I mixed Haruhi with someone else...it's a good start in the end...don't pay attention to the man behind the curtains *carries on*
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PostSubject: Re: Comments Section   Comments Section I_icon_minitimeMon Jun 28, 2010 3:03 am
XD It's alright, I've done the same thing, only I was really sleep deprived at the time.
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